⑴ 考研作文 推薦電影 請幫我看看寫的有什麼錯誤,能改進嗎
以下是我個人建議,僅供參考~
首先我覺得這篇文章寫得略過簡單,沒有特別出彩的地方,有點像四級考試作文~
然後有些地方我覺得語法不對,寫得有點中國式英語
第一句:I am writing to you to recommend a movie for you which shows an Chinese assassin in Qin Dynasty.
The name of the movie is hero,you may be confuse about why an assassin is a hero.
but they do not use it unlimited 這里unlimited應改為unlimitedly~副詞修飾動詞。
because they know,with great power comes great responsibility.
可以改為:the more power they use, the more resposibility they shuold pay.
The chief actor of this movie is acted by Li Jet ,這句actor應改為role.
In this movie,you would know a truth that a greet knight,for the country and for the people,it is the essence of the Chinese Xia culture.這句中it is the essence中is應去掉,不然一個句子有2個主語了。
he has kung fu ,這個我感覺不應該用has,但我也不知道用什麼好
暫時就這些了,希望對你有幫助~
⑵ 2022考研英語作文推薦信怎麼寫
推薦信可以推薦一個人、一個地方、一本書、一部電影。在信中表明推薦的內容、原因及進一步的溝通。
第一段概括說要推薦的內容:I am writing to you to recommend .I have sufficient reasons to
introce this to you and I dare say this is the best I have ever seen.
第二段敘述推薦的東西的價值,可以從表面和深層兩方面來寫:This movie/book/city的主題或城市坐落於哪裡。What is more,
情節吸引人、里邊景色引人入勝。Finally, this movie will definitely change our attitude toward
this world and the people around us. We will learn that......
第三段總結句:Therefore I don』t hesitate to recommend this to you. I am sure you
will enjoy the.