⑴ 考研作文 推荐电影 请帮我看看写的有什么错误,能改进吗
以下是我个人建议,仅供参考~
首先我觉得这篇文章写得略过简单,没有特别出彩的地方,有点像四级考试作文~
然后有些地方我觉得语法不对,写得有点中国式英语
第一句:I am writing to you to recommend a movie for you which shows an Chinese assassin in Qin Dynasty.
The name of the movie is hero,you may be confuse about why an assassin is a hero.
but they do not use it unlimited 这里unlimited应改为unlimitedly~副词修饰动词。
because they know,with great power comes great responsibility.
可以改为:the more power they use, the more resposibility they shuold pay.
The chief actor of this movie is acted by Li Jet ,这句actor应改为role.
In this movie,you would know a truth that a greet knight,for the country and for the people,it is the essence of the Chinese Xia culture.这句中it is the essence中is应去掉,不然一个句子有2个主语了。
he has kung fu ,这个我感觉不应该用has,但我也不知道用什么好
暂时就这些了,希望对你有帮助~
⑵ 2022考研英语作文推荐信怎么写
推荐信可以推荐一个人、一个地方、一本书、一部电影。在信中表明推荐的内容、原因及进一步的沟通。
第一段概括说要推荐的内容:I am writing to you to recommend .I have sufficient reasons to
introce this to you and I dare say this is the best I have ever seen.
第二段叙述推荐的东西的价值,可以从表面和深层两方面来写:This movie/book/city的主题或城市坐落于哪里。What is more,
情节吸引人、里边景色引人入胜。Finally, this movie will definitely change our attitude toward
this world and the people around us. We will learn that......
第三段总结句:Therefore I don’t hesitate to recommend this to you. I am sure you
will enjoy the.